Find Out Where Your Page Loses People — Before Paying Anyone to Fix It.
Send one page. Within 3 business days you get a written teardown, specific to your copy — not a generic checklist with your logo on it.
- Where the message leaks — the exact points a visitor's attention or trust drops, section by section
- What your copy assumes that your buyer doesn't yet believe — the invisible gap that kills conversions
- What I'd research first — which customer material holds the language your page is missing
- An honest scope call — including "your copy is fine, the problem is elsewhere" if that's the truth
Free means free: no obligation, no strings, no "let's hop on a call to discuss your audit" ambush.
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Two quick steps — under a minute.
Four Lenses on One Page.
The same evaluation I run before writing any copy — applied to the page you already have.
The message-to-visitor match
Does the page speak to the awareness stage its traffic actually arrives at? An ad-clicker and a Google-searcher need different first sentences — most pages give both the same one.
The claim audit
Every claim on your page, sorted: which ones a skeptical buyer accepts, which trigger "says who?", and which are doing nothing but occupying space.
The objection gaps
The questions your buyer is silently asking that the page never answers — the most common reason a warm visitor leaves without converting.
The research prescription
Where your customers' real language lives — which reviews, calls, or communities to mine first, whether you hire me to do it or do it yourself.
You Can't Verify a Copywriter Before Paying One. This Fixes That.
The biggest problem with hiring copy help — everyone claims results, and you can't check the claims until your money's already spent. I'd rather remove the problem than argue with it: the audit shows you exactly how I think, on your page, at zero risk.
If the thinking is good, you'll know who to call when you're ready. If it isn't, you've lost nothing and gained a teardown. Some audits become projects; the rest are the marketing budget I'd otherwise spend on ads claiming things this page lets you verify instead.
Audit Questions.
The Only Copywriter Evaluation That Happens Before You Pay.
Scroll back up, fill the two steps, and judge the thinking on your own page.
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